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I loved this poem it made me smile.. btw you love writing about smiles dont you lol. very adorable. a little grammar errors but understandable. The title captured my attention right away. Unique titles are the key to getting a readers attention. 5/5

That's so sweet, but so sad...4/5!

Wow, this is truely unique. I can relate to this so much. We all crave something like this, and this poem is really honest in that way. It's amazing how someone so far away can keep us happy. I enjoyed this for the concept of it, the flow and repetitive words were very effective. An excellent write. =] 5/5

Tammie

Awww how cuteeee. thats the same thing i'm going through....cool 5/5

Aww. i liked this poem goran. the only error is the word bright in the first stanza. use brightens instead.

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