No longer there

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 12, 2007


(for contest against Bethany depression not my specialty)

Wrecked up all within
these feelings
confuse and
burn me to a crisp.

I ponder thoughts of only you
to end up
screaming and
howling too.

I wish you'd go away
but i know its too good to
be true and ill always
love you.

I know I wont escape
you'll leave me to die
and so I
cry.

Slowly my mind fades
stress i the only thing sane
but I know my efforts
are always in vain.

PLz vote and comment.

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  • 16 years ago

    by monicaaelyse

    K thanks for your comment on mine:)
    this is amaaaaazzzziiinnnng:P

    12/10

  • 16 years ago

    by Photograph My Memory

    Nice poem well done *!*~*!*~*!*~*!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizzie

    That was really good. thanks for commenting on my poem. I dont usually write sad poems, but lately....well, that's all I can write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Very nice poem, well written and has a strong meaning. Flows nicely too.

    Well done 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    Excellent.. u just earned a 5/5
    i looooooove the structure.
    u know.. u should've used "," and ".." more.. cause many dont read it right, thats why they rated lower then 5 ... and its a shame,.. this poem is very very good.
    keep it up!

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