Lonely

by ImNotPerfect20   Jun 16, 2007


Why does everything always happen to me?
I try to do everything right and just.
Everyone sees me as a little girl,
not knowing what to do in life.

If I could show them my Opinions
They would know that I am not..
what they think, but a grown woman
Ready to live her life and not show fear

I go through the motions of everyday
Waiting for something to happen
Just trying to live my life the way I want
Not looking for trouble, But life happens

Everyday I sit here waiting for something more
Nothing ever works for me, I can't do this anymore
Looking and waiting for the time to be right.
Waiting for eternity for him to come and find me.

Just hoping that I won't be alone anymore
I can't deal with this life, the loneliness is hurting
Longer and longer I wait loosing any hope that I had
I cry out and hope in the end I won't feel like this.

Note: I have not wrote in a while.. i have been feeling depressed lately.. this is what came out of it.. Hope you like it

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  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This is indeed a sad poem and yeah i can somehow feel the emotions but doesn't completely strike my heart.. the simplicty were okay it made the poem more easy to figure out for the readers like me...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Your depresion is depicted in this piece well. The flow of emotions is very nice and I liked your wordings. Just be brave and be hopeful, things will be ok :) 5/5 all the way

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Depression is a great time to write it helps get things out that you would never think very strong feeling throughout the whole poem good job 5/5

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    This poem is good. and dfeeling depressed ltes me write even better. sound kind of strange but it does. youll find the person you have been waiting for. im waiting for mine too, but it might take a while.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This poem is very good and deep...i can feel ur emotions pouring over tht poem i lik this line the best

    "Looking and waiting for the time to be right.
    Waiting for eternity for him to come and find me."

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