Your best

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 17, 2007


We have regrets
sometimes were a mess
but please
just do your best.

It may not be enough
no more can be done
no less is left
when your trying your best.

We make mistakes
so repent
show the world your
regret and make sure
it never happens again.

Your best bet is better
then the rest so please
dont fret.

(Plz vote and comment)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vesper

    After reading most of your poems I have to say that this is my favorite one...Thumbs Up! Keep 'em coming and a 5/5 from me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This is nice.
    I think you should try and put more emotion into it.
    But other than that it's pretty good.
    _AMber_

    P.s. Thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Your best bet is better
    then the rest so please
    dont fret.

    -short, sweet and catchy. i liked it gud job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a good poem andrew like the way you changes rhyme schemes, i give this a 5/5!! thanx for reading my poem, keep these coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Soso Shadow

    Youre really good at poems. keep it up
    5/5
    thanks for the comment
    Megan<33

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