Mindslaver

Nice Word Choice!!
Very Impressive!
5/5 :)

Another refreshing read different from the norm and something I quite enjoyed. It flowed perfectly and the repitition was effective in getting across your message. I loved how it was short yet held so much power and meaning. You are talented no doubt.

Well done.
*5/5*

Hmmm... this some how made me sad... it seems you don't get much out of life... and your kind of... froating mentally... does that make sense?? still very good piece... 5/5

It was a short and sweet write, what i imagined was a person tired of everyday life, wanting something new, a way out but it was impossible and everything would remain the same nice poem.

Very good free verse, although it was short. You have an impressive vocabulary.

"An echo, this day,
those days,
like now-a-days.."

That was absolutely my favorite part... it can have so many different meanings.

5/5