The Sweetest Kiss

Oh wow i love this poem its awesome...very nice...i love your writing i really do...and you have a book wow that is awesome...i want to put my poems in a book...could you pls help me i really need it...please get back to me soon...private message is the best...thanks so much...always Manda

Aww that is really sweet! I love the message in it, flow was flawless. Great vocab! :) And I love the opening line - it really grabs the reader's attention and the ending was really good.

With the magic touch of your lips,
^^ Beautiful line!

I also loved this one and believe that it was beautifully penned but i of course would change the one line Your Lips have gave me strengths to your lips have given me strengths. just a minor note but still rather important to a lot of people who can edgy about grammar. Other than that it was a great poem. 5/5

How breathtaking!
So simple. Yet so full of strong emotions.
it was beautiful.
And I think as said above. The shortness just added to it's wonder.
This poems was amazing.
Well done,
Elaine

I like this poem because it is described enough only to get the gist of the emotion.. it's vague in a good way.. like a mystery. But it's sweet, (not like candy), but not bittersweet either. I don't really know what to say.. but if I could figure it out, it'd all be good things.