Tornado (String Haiku)

Great poem.
the imagery is great.
I really like the words you chose.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Cindy you did an amazing job on this piece as if one was standing and watching it as it takes place ,wonderfully written and very powerful write ,great choice of words, very job my friend your friend Tracy d 5/5

Nice string haikus....I always thought just one is too short....can almost picture those dark stormy skies and the stillness of the wait!

Cindy this is a flawless description of Tornado

Fsams anlysis of your poem:

Heading:

The heading "Tornado" is 100% cohesive and relavent to the content.

Poetic competence:

The poem is well adhered to the Haiku rules and as I know about this type, it should be descriptive....and no doubt that this is 100% descriptive. The lexis used really matches the ppoem and it makes the right piece with the inntended meaning with regard to the caption. It has both lexical and poetic qualities.

Content:

The precise words add so much of meaning in to the Haiku strings that readers feel a complete description of a Tornado. Great Cindy :)

Rating:

No doubt it is worth 5/5

Remarks:

Dear Cindy, your poems always captivate my heart and induce me to read with all my heart. This is flawless poetry. Tc

"impinged, rumble, twirls"

My, what a gorgeous piece about tornadoes, Miss Cindy! (^^,) The part where you stated "Deadly silence cries..." exudes, quite vividly, a rather audible sound with me--either shedding tears or screaming.

I loved it! 'twas my real pleasure to read it. =]

All the best and take care.

Love,
Debbie