Taking

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 13, 2007


Whats wrong little one
isnt so much fun
killing the one you love.

You have hate for a moment
sorrow and torment
is the only thing left dorment

Cry for your silly mistake
it'll be one you'll never make
taking someone's fate.

Your on the ground
making some screaming sounds
eyes opened wide
stress is what you confide.

your lost on earth
twisting and rolling
your guide is nowhere to be found.

Life is upside down
dont worry
you'll quickly drown.

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  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Hidden meanings are great arent they?
    I like how you would put the spoken person out of misery- drowning by misery and suffering?
    cool

  • 16 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    This was really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Wow. thats very deep

  • 16 years ago

    by Danni

    Wow... I really liked that... it was sad and captured the moment...

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet_rebellion

    Wow, beautifully written. Strong emotions. Great poem, you are very talented! Keep up the great work. I'd like to see more soon!

    sweet_rebellion