88 Hours

by Goran Rahim   Jul 17, 2007


Now it has been
88 hours
Since last time I spoke to you
Yet every second
I am in search of a new word from you.
Are you mad at me?
Or
Am I upset with you?
Yet I don't know
But
All I know is
I am dying without you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I, too, did sense the need for more coherent and elaborate details. It seemed to me to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. But then, again...

    I see that you're certain not to amend this piece. Still, it's candidly expressed, with bittersweet thoughts of longing to hear one's lover once more... somewhere or wherever... hmm. Just my thoughts anyway. For a short write, you've encompassed so much already.

    Nice one, nonetheless.All the best and take care! ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    So very touching...because it came stright from ur heart
    and thats the beauty, simple yet plusible...
    great work...

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I did like this poem alot. I found it to be different to your usual and I'm not quite sure how. The flow was quick on it which I did like. And the last line ended this piece really well. The emotion again strong and powerful. A great piece. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Short and to the point-love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow short but sweet 4/5

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