What happened?

by Rose not your average   Jul 26, 2007


You dont know the truth
You dont even care.
You just glare.
I thought you were my friend!

What did I do?
I truly never knew!
I thought we were able to talk,
Talk and walk.

But you dont want anything to so with me,
You told me to flee!
I dont understand!
I dont understand your demand!

You said you would always be there,
You would swear.
But that was a lie,
But why?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You could write this piece better. Atmosphere of this poem could be much stronger and wording isn't great. Interesting topic but it isn't very original. 4/5 (sorry that is just my opinion but your other poems are better)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Ryanne

    This is good. and i can so relate to it. great job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Great write

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by bella

    Ohh this poem is really cute i love it and can so relate to it. Keep up the good work.

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