Hope

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 31, 2007


A feeling in which I embrace
There is not only a trace
for when i fall
hope will guide me through all.

The determination is my light
it makes me strong
so I fight.

Hope takes me to new heights
giving me strength
I shall reach my so called sky
and have what I believe in life.

Hope is a ray
Which makes dreams come true
all yoyu gotta do is follow through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow! an amzing piece of poetry 5/5

    "Hope is a ray
    Which makes dreams come true
    all yoyu gotta do is follow through."

    so true!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not

    Being honest i aint seen a poem format like that before, but it worked really well... inspiration to me...

    tops marks 5 / 5 spot on mate!

  • 16 years ago

    by letmedieforeva

    Very good i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    The simplicity of each words really jives the poems and it was really nice, even the flow. nice poem and nice message.

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    The simplicity of each words really jives the poems and it was really nice, even the flow. nice poem and nice message.

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