Piece of Me

by *Charisma*   Aug 2, 2007


Piece of Me
By: Charisma

You took most of my heart
The sanity from my mind
You took film in my camera
And too much of my time.

You ate away my minutes
Dripped the ink out of my pen
Left me thinking there was hope
Then took that all again.

You stole my word's allowance
In wasted conversations
You took away my happiness
And filled it with frustration.

You took me up to heaven
Then let me fall down from it's heights.
You let me think life was perfect
When it wasn't even all right.

You took away my chances
Of finding someone true
Because you let me believe
That Mr. Right was you.

You tore down all my walls
So now I have to rebuild.
You made me feel so bad
That I carried all the guilt.

But now that I don't care
I'm standing so you'll see
You will never take another,
Not one more piece of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    It felt like I looked in the mirror and saw this poem. It's like you knew my own tragic story. I loved it, one of my favorites! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenie

    WOW!!! this is such a diffrent style and i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    u r so strong to finaly put an end to it!- dont let em get another piece of u!

    great talent!
    5/5

    Jenie

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "You took away my chances
    Of finding someone true
    Because you let me believe
    That Mr. Right was you."

    Well done Charisma, you've poured out so much emotion in this poem, it almost sounds like your speaking from experience..
    Wonderful rhythm
    5/5
    *Gem*

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