by luv Shelbz luv Aug 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Have you watched the news lately |
by Chelsey
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I agree. |
by Melpomene
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I did like the overall meaning of this poem which you portrayed although my intention just wasn't fully grabbed not like your other poems it seemed to simple to explain the world and life which is complex. More details would make this better. ~mel |
by Cella Bella
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This is a powerful write. I think everyone can relate to this. It's full of truth. I really enjoyed this piece. 5/5 |
by Corruption
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This is a good poem |
by Debbie
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You capture your theme with an unadorned, yet sound detail that makes it wholly pragmatic. It further seems to me to be an excitable rant of emotional steam, reminding me of a certain someone bewildered by the world's current situation. Severely captivating to say the least. All the best and take care. ~Marian |