Power of try

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 21, 2007


In the deep
I know its steep
but I gotta try
or I'll die inside.

I must hope
for a chance is at work
for people I love
to rise above.

Others may be corrupt
but that will not interrupt
morals inside
I shall fly

My path may be different
but none should put me down
for I will not frown.

I shall live to my code
the book engrinded in my soul
I will be all whole.

I shall fight and smile
yes this is my style
oh its been awhile.

I learn from being torn
I might have mourned
Yes it scrons.

But so what
being depressed wont bring much.

Come strut your stuff
The world's no muck.

Be proud
dont care who you are.

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    by dalllllal

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    by rhonyl

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    by Nix

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