The Blood That Flowed

by The Queen of Spades   Aug 21, 2007


I hope she remembers
Her heart was broken
That the cracks still linger
And the red oozing from them
Does not taste sweet

I pray she never forgets
The way the earth shook
How she fell to her knees
And the pain staining her skin
Never really left

I hope she remembers
That looks are deceptive
Kisses are but a pointless action
And the crimson in her mouth
Is the bitter truth

I pray she never forgets
The woman she is
The woman she can be
And never succumbs hopelessly
To the woman she was

I beg her to never forget
I implore myself to remember
The blood that flowed

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  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    Truly said.. you are a mature writer and your poems say it all:)
    Excellent one^^

  • 6 years ago

    by Khalid

    I loved the alternating repetition of the 1st two words (I hope & I pray) in each stanza then ending differently with another type of words (I beg). This totally attracts attention of the reader. the flow reveals smooth and unrestricted sequential dripping of thoughts. The most important thing here is the coordination between different stanzas, which made the poem tightly sewed together with experience. You I still can imagine you reciting it in front of the public. It's really full of emotion and sorrow. One of my favorites.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was good. The emotions were powerful, it flowed well and the imagery was good too.
    you have a gift
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, way and again WOW! Amazingly written, you are so talented, I'm adding you to my favorite authors list. I like everything about this one: You described emotions excellently and you created great atmosphere through the piece.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Adelle

    I enjoyed this poem it was deep and full of emotion I feel that there was something that threw this poem off however I do not seam ot be able to identify what this was so I give you a 4/5.