A Simple Hi

by Goran Rahim   Aug 28, 2007


I want to tell you how I feel,
Tell you how much I love you.
I want you to know,
That my heart worships you.

I want to tell you,
My feelings are deep.
Remembering your smile,
All night I cannot sleep.

I want you to know all that,
Then I remember you love another guy.
I know what love means,
Therefore, all I can tell you is a simple "hi"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Hmm this made me sad but good job. dast xosh

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Aww that is a really good poem, i love the wording and punctuation beautifully written
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I loved the simplicity of word choice and the ending was a real killer - quite unexpected, giving the whole piece a melancholy, bittersweet taste.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwe its a nicepoem. i loved the style of saying "hi". you have tlalent. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    It has always been this way, the ones we love the most hurt us the most but the ones we think would never do anything to hurt us, brakes you, without even a single thought.......
    it is destiny, if you could change it then you will be history..but i wish most that nothing of this would come your way,,ur to kind, to sincer and gentlman like to deserve this kind of destiny..
    wish you the best..
    plz visit my poems...and do wirte if thou has time
    take good care my friend

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