No One Knew

Ok i really liked this one, they just keep coming and they just keep getting better and better, i can't believe it. you've outdone yourself again. beautiful job.

Oh my, i loved it. the way you described everything that was happening was awesome. you captured the idea brilliantly. 5/5

I think it is an awesome poem, but maybe I would take out a few of the No One Knew's in there. The reptition makes it stronger if it's not used quite as often and might make it flow better. Other than that though it is an awesome poem. I like it a lot. It's very touching.

.:Danielle:.

Well I liked it. It had good flow and good imagery and the emotion was evident. I really don't like the style with it running on, I just really like stanzas and having poems broken up a bit. Overall it was good and I still gave you a 5/5 because again the whole breaking up the poem is my own personal taste and I can't mark ya down for that.

This is pretty, goran, but i have a few suggestions give it a tighter structure, and if there anything you want capitalized because when you say miss poet, i feel like it should say Miss Poet, and so on. =]