Land of Dreams

by Loved In Hell   Sep 1, 2007


Getting lost in my dreams
One more time
Forgetting the world, living in a fantasy
How a dream be such a crime

I tried to come back to reality
But my thoughts won't let me
The truth has been locked
Am I chained or am I free

I pull my hair
Fall to the floor
A scream from inside my heart
The center of my core

Music begins to play
An old forgotten song
I was blind to see
I was alone all along

I have lost all control
Tears begin to fall
Something, someone
A name I call

Blood begins to spill
Pain and tears is all I feel
Then I realize the truth,
The pain is real

Emotions run crazy
Darkness covers my eyes
The inner and deepest part of me
Every inch slowly dies

As my eyes are shut
I see a light
Music is still playing
But it all disappears and I lose flight

I don't want to be weak
But I can no longer be strong
I want to know what happened
Why is everything so wrong

A knife at my throat
Pushing it further in
How did one dream
Become such a sin

Trapped in this world
Called "the land of dreams"
No one will ever know
My silent screams

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Sad, but a great poem ^.^ wooooooooooooo! go you ^^ i give ya a 5/5 ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful, from the beginning to the end, very emotional and descriptive. Truly greatly written poem it touched me in so many ways and I can relate to it. You expressed feelings excellently.
    Keep up!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I tried to come back to reality
    But my thoughts won't let me
    The truth has been locked
    Am I chained or am I free

    ^^my fav

    you have such great talent i love your writting this is like, i can relate to it.. i am depressed as well and its like your trapped and want people to care for you but like no one is there. lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Another one that I could truly relate with. The last stanza was so haunting and powerful, it was the perfect way to end a wodnerful poem. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    It was another amazing poem form you. If only i could express myself as you do. I hope i can write as good as you some day. Loved it all came form the heart. And i hope things get better. (lol) you know what that is about don't you? 5/5 form me.

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