Secret

by Natasha   Sep 24, 2007


There's a secret held within,
a story that begins, ends in sin.
ghosts of the past, held in her dreams,
no one hears the unyelled screams.
fear of the night takes her away,
demons come out, ask her to play.
fright of day haunts her still,
it has no end, it never will.
scared of what God will say,
when it comes to judgement day.
then the twilight, it's kreeping in,
her life, her world starts to spin.
night will come, this she knows,
the fear she has, she never shows.
she goes to bed, when it starts getting cold,
her long held secret remains untold.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    Sometimes its best for others not to know the things that haunt us....but is always a hard burden to bare. I can't say I fully understand (I'm not you) but I know what its like.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Hey Natz Babe,
    This is an amazing poem, sweetie.
    Take good care of yourself.
    I miss you so much, Natzzzzz babeeeee.
    5/5
    -Your Shortee Baby.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    I like this poem. it all connects really well.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very good dark poem, with greatly created atmosphere. You did good job with rhymes, too.
    I like the choice of words through the whole piece.
    My favorite lines are:

    -There's a secret held within,
    a story that begins, ends in sin.
    ghosts of the past, held in her dreams,
    no one hears the unyelled screams.-
    ^Truly effective

    5/5 from me

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