"above his influence she must rise" <-- oh how i adored that line right there. so much emotion and depth. i thought the flow was a little off in some places but you certainly made up for that with the overall piece. this was a beautiful heartfelt write and i enjoyed every bit of it.
1 main thing ...
(apologies for caps i want to shout it)
I LOVE THIS POEM!
This has been voted for as a 4 ... INSANITY!
This isn't just a message direct from the heart of the writer - it (should) touch the heart of every single reader! This is about more than a single person .. this is a message to everyone that has been in a relationship that they shouldn't be in or couldn't get out of! I changed all the his to her etc.. for obvious reasons. This poem resonates in the very core of anyone who's wanted out of a relationship.
[6/5] << No Typo