When A Dead Man Walks (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 10, 2007


Cold, alone; regret rules his mind.
Oblivious to what surrounds, date? Time?

Lost everything addiction killed him,
Now hes lost, frail and thin.

Traumatized by the whispers, the darkened looks.
Things are invisible when a dead man walks.

Cowering in the darkness, terrified of fate.
Only people who want trouble walk round this late.

No roof, no food, no future to build.
One little mistake cost him his world.

Will any one guide him? Allow his to express his thoughts?
No, things are invisible when a dead man walks.

UNFINISHED

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  • 12 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great!!! Must be 5/5!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by chind

    Hey this is really good.
    i liked the flow in this one.
    and id like to read it when you finsih it =]

    5/5

    xo.cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's so true how one decision can shape the course of your life, and although we might not know it at the time every little decision we make no matter when we make it, affects us. Excellent work once again 5/5 GG23 second last line you have "his" when you were trying to put him. Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Although it's unfinished, the song has a certain close. The meaning of this poem is really sad, a hopeless guy seeking for advice and guidance. Definitely a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    I loved how this began now if you can create a good back gound this would be fantastic good work Plot121