Who am I????

by gack60   Oct 17, 2007


Who am I? am i life or am i death?
How would you know if i had taken your last breath?

Watching and waiting while stalking my prey,
I'm a predator by night, but I'm weaker by day.

If you saw me how would you know?
Even if you did know would you let it show?

I consume your every thought, I'm even in your dreams.
I can be suppressed, although its harder than it seems.

I can be controlled, i can even be forgot.
But I'm here inside you all, whether you like it or not.

Fear is what i am, you all know me by that name.
For once Ive got a hold of you, you'll never be the same!

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    SO true. I love your poetry, you touch on some really interesting topics. personification in this piece is brilliant. I really like your style.
    DnB

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    "dreams" shouldn't be plural there. It doesn't sound right. Great concept, I like point of view. Nonetheless a great write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet again a great write. Short and to the point. Keep up the amazing work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Really like this idea, whiting a poem through the eyes of Fear. I would have liked to see this a little bit longer .. although you get alot across in just a few stanza's.

    I would have liked to see something about how you get into people, and what effects you can instill within them etc..

    Still well worthy of a 5 in my opinion.

    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

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