Those Three Little Words

by A l y s s a   Oct 23, 2007


Whats wrong with me? Small amounts of doubt still linger within.
You say you love me, why can't I return these strong affections?
Those three little words, I somehow lack the ability to say.

I'm not sure if it's confusion, fear of rejection or something else entirely?
I just don't know how to say it, how to feel it.
Those three little words hold so much depth, so much I don't understand.

You say I have your heart, but I'm uncertain whether I'm ready to entrust you with mine.
I want to offer it to you, but there's something obstructing me from doing so.
Those three little words, they make me feel like a fool.

I am the amateur in this game we call love.
Those three little words, how can something so small mean so much?
But pray, take heart. I'm not about to give up.

How can I relinquish something so great? Something that makes me so happy?
I can't. I won't. No one else can make me feel the way you do.
There is no other person I'd rather be with. You are my only.

At the mention of your name I can't help but smile.
When I see your face I am entirely joyful.
You send me spiralling with your softest touch, in your arms I feel safe.

So please, please be patient with me.
I may not be perfect, but I am yours.
For then. For now. Forever.

Ally. s

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Aww. Greaqt Poem. I Have Those Feelings To. Love This One. Keep It Up. [:

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Loved it! The passion and love here was so evident and the imagery was flawless. Sometimes we don't want to be rushed in saying "those three little words" because we want it to be special and meaningful so take your time.

    "At the mention of your name I can't help but smile.
    When I see your face I am entirely joyful.
    You send me spiralling with your softest touch, in your arms I feel safe."
    ^beautiful stanza.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I like the title of this peice. It made me want to read the peice. The details of the poem are great and your word choice honostly blew me away. The only thing that really threw me off after reading was your flow. I am no expert on flow, believe me when I say that, so it might just be me. It seemed a bit choppy. Other than that great job. I loved the emotion. 5.5

    Amber.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Aww really sweet.
    =]
    i like alot
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Again wow. im not really much into the love poems stuff but i made an aception with this one. again another well written poem. good work