A Bridge Between Two Eyes [Lento]

by The Queen of Spades   Nov 6, 2007


Heart, an organ meant to be broken
Part painful and half divine
Tart is the taste of shattered joy, a
Dart of agony dipped in wine

Brain, an organ meant to be divided
Feign the order of sweet demise
Pain reveals where dichotomy
Lain, in a bridge between two eyes

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A poetic style called "Lento" where the rhyme scheme of every first word in each stanza is AAAA BBBB and the rhyme scheme of the last words are ABCB ABCB

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  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    That was really neat. I've never read a Lento before. I loved the subject matter and words you used. Nice job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    This is very good Lento is extremely hard to do for most people keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I've never seen this style or I never realized it before. I think you did a great job in keeping with the style and still conveying the message.

    I agree with the others - your title was great. Many times I read a poem based on the title, I'm curious to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, i loved this. It was so powerful and i loved the form as well. The flow was good, the words you chose were perfect and the descriptions were very well thought through. I just really liked it, nice job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. You chose to write about the two most important things in a person's life. Great poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

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