Your cold hearted words

by Finalgravedigger   Nov 10, 2007


Your cold hearted words

I gave her all my soul and heart
would have done anything for her
even if being unwhole and ripped apart.

And so she asked for my tears
to please her sadistic pleasure,
wanting me in constant fear
no matter what the measure.

She loved calling me a simple toy
that got annoying real fast
just a small little boy
that would never last.

Pathetic and worthless were the words
you engrinded in my mind
I should have nothing to look toward
and I better run and hide.

Your cold hearted words
always stay on rewind
I never seem to move forwards
as you leave me behind.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jayke

    Hay im so happy that there are more people who have been used like me and feel how i feel, now i know im not alone out there, thanx bro for the comment hope to stay in touch

    Peace,
    Jake

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Hey, FinalGraveDigger

    Just checking out some of your poems i really like this one... 5/5 from me

    Noelle Wright

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Wow this is amazing. It's like a typical story, but totaly your own and personalized u know? keep up the good work<33

    --Xxo That Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This was so sad... but I know how you feel. I can totally relate to this piece, except in like, a female version =) I'm sorry to hear about what happened, and you definitely got not only your point across, but the pain as well. Keep it up dear. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    No wonder this poem has gotten so many comments.. it is truly amazing! The title alone caught my attention, but wow... I never expected it to be this good! I can totally relate. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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