Tears

by HaileyHelen   Nov 22, 2007


You know what I hate
More than anything else...
The feeling you get
Right before you cry
You try to hold back the tears
So you can
Call yourself strong
So it hurts even worse
When you CAN'T

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  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Really short but I can totally relate.

    So you can
    Call yourself strong
    So it hurts even worse
    When you CAN'T

    yup, perfect explaination of cryin. :( keep it up, not crying obviously but ......smile!

  • Omg, I totally agree with you on this. I absolutely hate it, also. Except, maybe you should put this on your quote section because it seems like a quote to me. I loved it and I'll still give it 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    I can conncent with this poem rather well. In my entire life i have cried three times. since the last time a refuse to cry. i enjoyed this one. well written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The poem is short. The expression of emotion is shown simply with a simple choosing of words. The flow is a little rocky and there aren't many rhymes. Try better next time 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Very heart felt poem haii loved it

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