Your eyes

by HaileyHelen   Nov 22, 2007

Your eyes are no longer bright
Your soul is as black as night
You wear a smile on the outside
and on the inside... you want to hide

Your heart is no longer warm
Your faith has been torn
You cry only in the dark
And your scars leave you marked

Your truth has been betrayed
They never would have stayed
You pretend that all is fine
Yet you wait for your sign

This poem was written for one of my friends when i found out some of the problems she has faced... her parrents leaving her and her having to be strong in the midst of teenage youth when everyone was trying to make her weak


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  • 15 years ago

    by Nightmare Fiend

    I liked this alot it was very sad and emotional and how you just said it mad it very beautiful. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good poem haii, the flow tis perfect, capitalize the "a" in the 4th line, i give this a flawless 5/5!!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Abu3li

    You pretend that all is fine
    Yet you wait for your sign

    so sad

    i liked it so much

  • 15 years ago

    by ABake

    I liked htis. It is a nice tribute. I think that it could of been longer. The emotion was deep && I could feel your sympathy and admiration towards her. Great job!


  • 15 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome poem haii i love poems that are dedicated to people and its very nice that u did this for ur friend

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