Because your my bestfriend

by xxTaegan Emilyxx   Jan 5, 2008


Because your my best friend,
Id run around the world to hold your hand,
by your side forever,
i promise i will always stand.

Because your my best friend,
Id give up the world to wipe away a tear,
Just to watch you smile again,
And watch the fading of your fear.

Because your my best friend
no matter where you are,
Ill come running to see you,
no distance is ever too far.

Because your my best friend
I look up to you,
Although your younger than me,
Your also stronger too.

Because your my best friend,
I hope you look up to me,
Because being your best friend
Makes me be the best that i can be.

**Again another written really quick while it was on my mind

xx Taegan Emily

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  • 16 years ago

    by ToXiC lOvE

    This is really good. this sounds just like how how i feel about my best friend. keep up the good work i cant wait to see how you write when you take your time.

    -Nicole

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This is a very sweet poem. i dont even have words to describe it. but nothing is wrong with this. i love it!!

  • Aw, such a beautiful poem. The flow is a bit rocky though, but it's nice. I loved it! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I like the simplicity of this piece, as well as the heart felt emotions you've expressed. I think it's good that it's not too long, four to six stanzas is usually a good amount. I especially liked the last line, very heart warmiing.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh that was so sweet and very sincere! i can see the sincerity and the great emotions. and it was totally well expressed! great describing about ur bestfriend 5/5