by Lonely Rider
Submission date : 2008-05-23
Last edit : 2008-05-25
Corinne ( F P C D )
This is very nice. Poems of nature always grab me, and you've done well both with rhyme and imagery
SouthernxCharm ( F P C D )
First attempt and the first success.
Well done. YOu have an amazing
way with your words. Keep up the
You are now one of my favorites.
NinjaGirl ( F P C D )
A very beautiful and touching piece of poetry. i liked the way you worded it and how it flowed so very wel together
Keep Writing, lovely
Empathy ( C D )
For the format that you put it into, I thought it was a very intriguing read. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this piece. Your imagery was great and your rhymes never seemed forced. Excellent work!
cycler73 ( F C )
Wow! this is a great poem. full of vision and meaning. It really captivated me. thanks!