Dawn to Dusk

by Lonely Rider

Dawn to Dusk (Minute Poetry)

Crowing bird greeting the first rays
Azure display
Shimmering dew
Swaying bamboo

Scorching sun crowning midnoon blue
Dusty milieu
Summer heat
Sizzling treat

Orange billows bedeck horizon
Rich creation
Silky moonlight
Enchanting sight.

*This is my first attempt... comments are welcome.. :)

**The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

 

Submission date : 2008-05-23
Last edit : 2008-05-25

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Corinne ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-03

This is very nice. Poems of nature always grab me, and you've done well both with rhyme and imagery

SouthernxCharm ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-04

First attempt and the first success.
Well done. YOu have an amazing
way with your words. Keep up the
wonderful work.
You are now one of my favorites.
<3Tay
5/5

NinjaGirl ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-05

A very beautiful and touching piece of poetry. i liked the way you worded it and how it flowed so very wel together


5/5



Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Empathy ( C D ) at 2008-06-16

For the format that you put it into, I thought it was a very intriguing read. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this piece. Your imagery was great and your rhymes never seemed forced. Excellent work!

cycler73 ( F P C ) at 2011-11-01

Wow! this is a great poem. full of vision and meaning. It really captivated me. thanks!



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