Battle of the Seasons (Sedoka)

by Meena Krish   Mar 3, 2017



While winter sits guard
spring slips through the opening
its light dimmed by a cold touch,

The days become wild
as spring and winter wage war
to reclaim control on earth,

Disconcerting nights
becomes a silent witness
hoping for brighter mornings,

But winter holds strong
to the throne it sits upon
whilst spring struggles for power!

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  • 8 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Beautifully penned. I wish spring always. But without losing there is no victory.

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, this is amazing! Darn it, I am out of votes too...Bah! You have put spring into perfect perspectives. Lovely!

  • 8 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Beautiful writing.

    Craig

    But she cannot hold back the spring
    With one final fury, she coats the world in white overnight.
    By morning she is gone, spring has won
    She can never stop his ascending.

    Funny how despite jack frost I always think of winter as female. Go figure lol

  • 8 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!!!

    Meena, it feels like ages since i've read your work and it's nice to see that it is still awesome as ever!

    This is freakin awesome.

    Ben

  • 9 months ago

    by yogi73

    I love how you have personified the seasons in an eternal battle. A right smart poem

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