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by Meena Krish Mar 3, 2017
Nature, environment /
While winter sits guard
spring slips through the opening
its light dimmed by a cold touch,
The days become wild
as spring and winter wage war
to reclaim control on earth,
becomes a silent witness
hoping for brighter mornings,
But winter holds strong
to the throne it sits upon
whilst spring struggles for power!
Beautifully penned. I wish spring always. But without losing there is no victory.
Meena, this is amazing! Darn it, I am out of votes too...Bah! You have put spring into perfect perspectives. Lovely!
by CJ Maleney
But she cannot hold back the spring
With one final fury, she coats the world in white overnight.
By morning she is gone, spring has won
She can never stop his ascending.Funny how despite jack frost I always think of winter as female. Go figure lol
Meena, it feels like ages since i've read your work and it's nice to see that it is still awesome as ever!
This is freakin awesome.
I love how you have personified the seasons in an eternal battle. A right smart poem
by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
by - Mr. Darcy