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by Matt Carroll Aug 4, 2017
Sadness, depression /
Into this place, so dark and dreary
My soul has wandered, weak and weary
Tear stained face, a heart so broken
A love unanswered, no words spoken
Hands are shaking, just reaching out
My cries for help ignored, no doubt
Drowning in this pain and sorrow
No longer hopeful of tomorrow
Pain consumes like fire and ice
No other's touch could now suffice
To heal the damage, cuts so deep
Their scars forever, secrets keep
Wings are severed, spirit shackled
All these fears remain un-tackled
Why won't you save me, what did I do
But give all myself, my love to you...
Matt, Simple yet so meaningful!
Flow, rhymes, perfect!
by CJ Maleney
Fantastic poem and sentiments I understand well
I really liked this. Great flow and nicely rhymed. Well done-
Definitely a great piece, Matt, your rhyming here was very well managed and it flowed really well because it came from your heart. Was a really beautiful, powerful piece.
by Milly Hayward
Wonderful piece great rhyming and dark emotion definitely a favourite for me
by Ben Pickard