by Brise Dec 20, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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This dark hidden corner torments me so |
by Ben
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I really like this write, wonderful tone and rhythm to your rhymes! great word choices too, awesome :) |
by Brise
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Thank you Ben ;) |
by Phoenix ¥
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Beautifully written with wonderful imagery - love this x |
by Brise
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Thank you Phoenix :) |
by William Mae
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The possibility of a dream is without borders, turning a dream into a reality is difficult. Very good read |
by Brise
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Thank you although this poem is pretty short felt I could have added a bit more . |
by Em
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What a fantastic piece with excellent rhyming |
by Brise
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Thank you! |