Your flight, my pain (mirror oddquain)

by Meena Krish   Aug 28, 2017



I
waited till
the distance consumed
you then let my vision blur,
whispers of prayer mingled with the air whilst
my unwilling heart thundered,
rain spilled… hoping it
won’t reach your
ears

for
there is no
point holding back a
heart that has sealed a firm choice,
let my pain be I’m one with it but know this…
I love you isn’t enough
to say how much I
truly love
you

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  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "Your fight, my pain (Mirror oddquain)" By Meena Krish 10 points

    It's been really difficult to pick my top 3 poems this week and even harder to pick my number one, there are just too many wonderful words.

    However this piece really stood out for me. I love the way it is formatted and it certainly grasps the readers attention.

    The poem itself is beautifully written and you can feel the emotion within it. It is such a shame something so beautiful is tinged with sadness.

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  • 8 years ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful poem Meena

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Thank you everyone for taking the time to read and
    comment, appreciate it very much...take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a true winner. Awesome. Take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Gorgeous write!

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