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by ShhhhItsASecretÂ© Nov 18, 2005
Life, society /
I am writing you this letter
To tell you what you need to do
Not just to make you feel better
Or help you with what you go through
But to guide you to your "cloud nine"
You deserve happiness, my dear
You can't keep pretending you're fine
When I know you're living in fear
Please just listen to what I say
I'm only trying to help you
I just can't see you go astray
You have potential, this is true
You're just going through a tough time
Take it easy and let it pass
And ask for help, it's not a crime
Soon, this will all be in the past
Stop holding everything inside
Just let the tears flow down your cheek
Feelings are not something to hide
Your tears will not make you look weak
You are strong and everyone knows
You just need a small break right now
It is time to take your repose
The pain will go away, somehow
It may not happen overnight
You may have to wait many years
But please just don't give up the fight
No matter how hard it appears
I know you have the strength you need
You just need to trust in your heart
And believe that you can succeed
You'll get the chance for a new start
Just believe that you can do it
I'll be here for you all the way
Just as long as you do not quit
Love always, the soul that will stay
Â© 2005 Brandy Dorr
by Cassandra Wojick
I really enjoyed it, 5/5!
by â™¥*3 simple words*â™¥
OMG!! I |L|O|V|E| this poem!!!
This is a great poem. Although it may have bad rhyming on some parts (was it planned) and the flow was choppy, the overall message and the imagery made this poem potent.
Aww this is a very beautiful and sweet poem. defiantly what people should hear. the rhyming was amazing and the flow was good too. keep writing! 5/5
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this poem is so good. I loved the flow of it as well.