A Response to "Looking at the Moon...I saw your Face

by Goran Rahim   Aug 24, 2006


The moment you were looking at the moon,
I was in a lonely room:
Writing another poem for you.

That moment,
I was breathing an air
Which was from your land.
I was reading a poem
Written by your hand.

That night,
Many times I tried to sleep
But could not , and realized
How much I miss you.
I wanted to sleep just because
I was sure
In my dream I would see you.

I wish it was not a dream
I wish it was true
When I came and wiped your tear drops
When I was there near you.

That night,
When I woke up
I realized, I was incomplete .
What I was missing was you
And just you.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, superb poem, all I can do is stand in awe, this is truly incredible, keep p the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was awsome.......I loved it....it almost made me cry. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 11 years ago

    by jello

    This is a great poem...yet again. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    This is good!! 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwww...thts so sad.....a 5/5 for me..