:O Little S poem.. how have i not seen this..
you even signed off on it with your real name...
This is so full of love lost and desire for it to spark up again and heartbreak.. so much pain.. I loved the rhyming in this and the layout.. but I can also see just how much you have progessed as a poet and as a person...
Also side note- i absolutely love this piece.. :)
5 months ago
by Ben Pickard
A wistful sort of write, Stephen, that has a perfect pace because of the excellent rhythm and rhyme.
Oh, I LOVE this!
I found it to be a mixture of sweet and sad.
Imagery you painted was beautiful, it creates clear vivid pictures for the reader, flow was flawless throughout the entire poem and the emotion can clearly be felt behind the words.
The only thing I wasn't to sure on was the use of so many I's, but apart from that I adore this.
My favourite part was the ending, I thought it to be very sad, yet elegantly written, intense and hardhitting.