Though your hand slipped out of mine

This poem is amazing.
The choosing of words is breathtaking, and the rhymes are just perfect.
This poem is a little peice expressing a lot. Although we're far, and not together, we'll still be connected by heart.

Excellent write 5/5

You are so creative it amazes me!

please keep writing i really like your wide imagintion if you know hwat i mean.?

'Life stagnant like rusting metals'
To be honest I like this line. It's creative. And very poetic too. I have no problem with that. Other lines are also very good. Wonderful write.

I woke up and the first thing i do is read this poem, absolutely amazing work here. Great word choice and flow, nice imagery too.

Wow, you're incredible. please keep up the good work!

5/5

HvN

RL
Another poem of sadness that has touched my heart.

Smile wilted into somber petals
Life stagnant like rusting metals
Love snatched by a devastating gale
An era of loneliness now prevail.

How painful it is when love is snatched away from us.

Dreams entrapped in forlorn eyes
Image shimmering in distant skies
Grim Reaper played its fatal trick
Living life like a burned out wick.

When the one you love dies. So do we. Walking through life like we are sleeping. Going through the days without purpose.

You never left any footsteps behind
Still I search in the sands of time
Though your hand slipped out of mine
Our heartstrings will remain entwined.

Even though this person is gone we pretend they are still beside us. The connection of love lives forever.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy