Between Two Hearts (Collab with End Of Eternity)

by Cindy   Aug 19, 2008


Wishing things were different
Another place another time
Souls connected across oceans
Two hearts forever entwined

Tears would have smiled brightly
Leaving covetous pain behind
Life appreciate it's worthiness
When only love fills our minds

Spirits flying through the night
Traveling hot desert sands
Sending all my love to you
Hold it gently in your hands

Sky would crack just to bless
This love that we hold inside
Heart would travel distances
Undoing tears that we have cried

Wriiten By Cindy Graver & End Of Eternity
July 9, 2008

Thanks for the title Anna :)

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  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. this poem is so beautiful! I love it and I really am touched by it. I can really relate to the story of this poem. It's so sad to share love with someone from far but it makes you closer in some ways too... Wonderfully written.

  • 12 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Lovely poem here Cindy. I love it more simply because it begins with wishes....."wishing things were different".......kinda take me to places....... You two compiled the whole poem beautifully. Awesome!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Lovely piece of writing... Loved the whole poem...

    Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    Wonderful poem and ending is great! Very flawless write.
    It starts with an intense emotion...
    "Wishing things were different
    Another place another time
    Souls connected across oceans
    Two hearts forever entwined"
    Very heartfelt...

    "Spirits flying through the night
    Traveling hot desert sands
    Sending all my love to you
    Hold it gently in your hands"
    What wonderful lines! So much of passion and love in to it! Something expressed the immense love to other. Very delicate indeed.
    And as I said last stanza is terrific. Makes the poem perfect!
    Great poem by you two! Awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I was just thinking the same thing that it is hard to tell who wrote which stanza. You two mesh well. A dream, a hope, a loving friend across the seas....Beautifully penned, excellent flow....touching...