Aww.. this poem is so beautiful! I love it and I really am touched by it. I can really relate to the story of this poem. It's so sad to share love with someone from far but it makes you closer in some ways too... Wonderfully written.
Lovely poem here Cindy. I love it more simply because it begins with wishes....."wishing things were different".......kinda take me to places....... You two compiled the whole poem beautifully. Awesome!!!
Wonderful poem and ending is great! Very flawless write.
It starts with an intense emotion...
"Wishing things were different
Another place another time
Souls connected across oceans
Two hearts forever entwined"
"Spirits flying through the night
Traveling hot desert sands
Sending all my love to you
Hold it gently in your hands"
What wonderful lines! So much of passion and love in to it! Something expressed the immense love to other. Very delicate indeed.
And as I said last stanza is terrific. Makes the poem perfect!
Great poem by you two! Awesome!
I was just thinking the same thing that it is hard to tell who wrote which stanza. You two mesh well. A dream, a hope, a loving friend across the seas....Beautifully penned, excellent flow....touching...