Summer Dance (Haiku)

by Cindy   May 14, 2009


Summer Dance

Delicate daisy
Swaying gently, summer dance
Basking in the sun

Written by: Cynthia Graver
May 13, 2009

For a club challenge

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  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is so beautifully put, it's like art. I loved the imagery and flow in it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow with so little words, you managed to capture the essence of daisies. It really allows me as the reader to visualize the picture which you have painted. Indeed you have set the mood even for me to bask in the sun.

    Brilliant

  • 14 years ago

    by SADADDY

    What a Picture you paint with your words. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

    sadaddy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Gorgeous write, I can picture this bright yellow daisy swaying in the light breeze.. makes me want summer to be here already!
    Brilliant.. :]

    Well done!
    5/5.
    Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

  • 14 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Dear Cindy,
    what a lovely piece of art .5/5.The best part -it reflects your positive outlook. The summer dance of blooming daisies.Beautiful.Swing with fullness of life.Lots of love.God bless.