I Wonder.... (Huitain)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 10, 2009


I Wonder... (Huitain)

Huitain has 8 lines. Each line has 8 syllables only. Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme. Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme. Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme.

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As I slowly sit and ponder,
Some of life's greatest mysteries.
How many stars shine up yonder,
How many raindrops fill the sea.
I wonder why He should love me,
Deep in my heart I do implore.
How such love could ever reach me,
But I shall praise Him evermore.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Loved how you capitolized 'He' and 'Him' it emphasizes the meaning of this person, they are very important to you. Interesting thoughts, how many stars fill the sky and how many drops can fill the sea. I dont think I can say I have ever thought of that. :) Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This has a spiritual feel to it which gives the
    heart a ray of hope. You have done well
    with the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderfully penned...
    very meaningful write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Beautifully written Olwin with a lovely sentiment behind your words, i like contemplative poetry.

    Grant

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful job on the form challenge Olwin.
    NIce subject :)
    ((Hugs))
    Cindy

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