Reflections

by Lonely Rider   Aug 26, 2009


Under the silver sky,
clouds floating by,
reflecting bygone tales,

If only sands of time
had not fiercely raged,
at our lone castle,

Would then I had noticed,
the missing hues
in my dream palette.

Or a few more stars
camouflaging
the shadowy nights.

Smiles more warmer
and tears - a little less
in long lonely days. Maybe.

Sigh!!! solitude beckons again,
under the silver sky
and clouds floating by.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Annaam

    "Sigh!!! solitude beckons again,
    under the silver sky
    and clouds floating by. "
    --> WOw. Very well done :)

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Very touching

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a great poem. I can feel the sadness.

    Sigh!!! solitude beckons again,
    under the silver sky
    and clouds floating by.

    This stanza really tugged at my heart
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely, somewhat melancholy poem. Just the right touch of rhyme here and there. Nicely done :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Solitutde, sometimes its good sometimes it
    hurts to be alone..I can feel your emotions
    in each verse...take care.

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