Help... (Josephs Star )

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 29, 2009


-----------------Help!
-----------Save the world
---------Make it better soon
---Heal the world that we live in
------ Creation slowly dying
-------Creatures are crying
--------------Do we care?
------------------Ask.

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he Joseph's Star form
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1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1. The poem may be written on any subject, be center aligned, has
no stanza limit, and should have complete statements in each line.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    A very powerful message behind this, 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Seems like nobody cares as the world withers
    & dies. Liked the read :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Good job there Rambling Irish lady lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was true and relevant to today's world. There are many problems we could solve if we worked together. A great write that opens the reader's eyes. Great work. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I loved this. I love how you worded this. I've seen so many poems like this but I can really relate to what you're saying in this one. Great work deary :) Nik

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