Galactic Ocean

by Lonely Rider   Sep 24, 2009


Galactic Ocean

Profound mysteries wrap
chemicallized clouds
of matter, antimatter.
Gravitate.

Exotic starscapes
form superclusters
presenting twinkling view
on earthly podium.

Galactic Ocean of
celestial debris,
stellar ribbon,
cosmic years away.

Silver River intrigue
perplexing theories
and array of myths.
Residue - foggy answers.

**In Japanese, 'Silver River' means galaxies in general and the Milky Way is called
the 'Silver River System'

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    This is a very unique piece. I like it. The imagery was fantastic. Nice job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this..its like a mystical piece where your
    read took us through space to view its beauty..good write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by effervescence

    An interesting an unique write! The images were vivid and intriguing. Great job and congrats on your 100th poem!

    Athena :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Rocky

    I dont usually like 4 line/stanza poems as i find the generic and boring. but that was different enough to be interesting. it was almost like a picture slideshow but with words. i actually quite enjoyed it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was truly an unique write. Thanks for teaching us something new, I did not know about your note on the bottom. Interesting and original write, thanks for sharing. :]

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