Last Spring

by Lonely Rider   Oct 21, 2009


Last Spring

Pink satin ribbons,
ribbons of yester's smile,
smile tightly embrace,
embrace me for a while.

While I walk along,
along the summer streets,
streets warm, still frozen,
frozen with memories.

Memories of spring,
springs up each day,
day and night have swapped,
swapped since you went away.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    Wow, i really loved the last stanza. good work. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This truly was a beautiful Loop poem..it did not say so in the title, so cought me off guard...even though you repeat the words, it is not forced and this is even more of an achievement because the lines are really short....very impressive, both in skill and also in quality, because it is a very beautiful poem.

    God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Beautifully penned Raj, from the first line to the last. I agree with Rainbow, your wording was just too profound, too beautiful.Probably this is the one form i would gladly try..

    Well done..

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is written with such ease and flawless
    flow. LIked the read..beautifully sad.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Well done Raj :) This is a beautiful poem... and so well done. I love the form ... its brilliant... and so is this piece! Loved it .

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