She Takes A Leap

Wow, a Superb Write Meena!!!

Meena what a chilling poem you have penned. You put so much emotion in everything you write and this was no exception.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

It's so heart breaking when someone is so determined to take their own life, and refuse any help to pull them from that abyss. You have captured this so poignantly here. I unfortunately was there when someone commited suicide when I was in college. I will never forget that sad moment.

This was full of suspense not only because of how this was written but the format of it as well. A very powerful poem full of emotion. I really enjoyed this, it was something different full of imagery and well worth the read. (: Well done!

Meena, this is excellent. Suspense builds and your words create such a vivid image of that woman in the room, then jumping. Best I have read in a long while. Gets a nomination from me.