The Unknown

by Lonely Rider   Apr 1, 2010


Psychedelic dreams haunt
damp corridors of
unknown.

I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny.

Reflections claw
solitute -
my only solace.

"Once upon a time" ended abruptly.
Heart became the Unknown,
when? I don't remember.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its like becoming a stranger to ourselves..that we don't even know who we are and what we have lost. A deep write of
    sadness..take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Very well done Raj. A powerful short poem that you have so well penned... with excellent, unique word choice. Loved it! This my favourite part also...Lol.

    "I am broke, repaying interest
    of smiles, borrowed
    from destiny"

    Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Penned quite nicely, very original wording.
    Might want to run the spell checker to clear up a couple of misspelled words, otherwise a nice read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is sad when we don't remember losing our smiles and dreams that we had. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I am broke, repaying interest
    of smiles, borrowed
    from destiny

    ^Really loved this part as well. Thought it was very powerful & interesting the way it was worded.

    Aprubly - AbrupTly.

    Other than that just very well done, It's amazing how a few words , a short poem, can be so powerful and interesting. Very nicely done. :]

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