Superstar

by Lonely Rider   Aug 26, 2010


Her nails aren't manicured and skin has lost the grace
unlike figures in glossy Mag, time had marked its pace,
but in dark lonely nights, when she embraces you tight,
subtle warmth gently reveals, beauty hidden inside.

Neither he's the poster boy, splashed across Page 3,
With dazzling Golden boot or Mercedes SUV,
but when unknown chasm, secretively schemes ,
his strong arms will forever, fight for your dreams.

The fingers remain entwined, through shadowed maze,
or face of your smile, shinning behind the grays
is an image reflected, by moments afar,
The reason of your life, the real superstars.

** Dedicated to the real superstars of my life - My parents, bro and sister...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A really good write. I like the idea of life's really superstars being the ones that are closest to us. A good strong ending as well. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    I enjoyed your write. Tis nice to have heros and superstars in ones life ...

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This had strong expressions and interesting one starting from the opening lines...and everything just rhymed so well.

    I really loved what u have done with the word choice and its as if their daily lives or even personality been penned

    :) gr8 job
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lana

    This is a wonderful dedication to the 'real' people in this world. Who needs an air-brush when you have family and friends who love you for who you really are.

  • 13 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I really like this poem, but I think I accidently rated it wrong.. But I wanted to rate it as excellent

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