The Mind Begs For Mercy

Ohhhhhhhh I loved this! It reminded me of a poem Id write! I like the examples, and the lists, it makes me read it fast and understand it a little bit, then i read it again and understand it more. I really liked this. Your second stanza was awesome :)

This Is Amazing!
I Love The Way You Write Its So Inspiring!
The Words You Use Are Perfect!
5/5

Must say, the structure is alluring. Each sentence progressively deepens the affect this composition has upon readers. The flow is lucid. Speaks alot about the organized mess that is, the author. The word play is certainly amusing yet it does not distract the reader from the poem continuity. Splendid job.

Wow, that's one hectic mind you've penned there, lol. Good job on the repetition, it enhances the atmosphere of this piece along with its precise use of words. Good job!

You are my bella girl, lol!

I liked the play on words, so much, the wording was unique. I felt you were hopeless within these words, trying to describe the way you were feeling yet unable to portray them, and I was like.....oh I can feel this! every part made sense more than the one before it. In brief, this was an epic write.

Five, and a nomination the next week.