Burn After Reading

Nice this poem made me smile since the only reason i know what the heck "anemic" means is that i am anemic myself and it made me smile that what a thing would stand as a bad thing would be used to describe beauty and the other part that i totally loved in this poem that i love is the second stanza since that's pretty much me at times and again i gotta say i LOVE this poem! :) 5/5 from me

Ashlin

Sometimes we feel the need to burn our thoughts, and writing is a release of those thoughts, so to burn our words means that those thoughts die a little, whether this really could be true, I am not sure, I never tried it, but I do screw up some poems that I feel weren't that good, not a representation of what I'm feeling but never burnt them...

I liked this, then flow was smooth and transitional, and the wording was powerful, and very natural.

Great piece...
xx

Superb Hannah!!!

I love that line!...burning is actually a form a therapy....to release memories, pain, anger, etc, therapists recommend for their patients to write things down and burn it after writing it...or after someone reads it.....i have never lit paper to fire, however I have thrown it away or crumbled it and it did feel good....

love the wording here a again, it created a really pretty flow. well done!

Very well written it convey a lot of emotion it expresses a lot... 3 stanza a lot of strong and powerful lines on it...