One Night Sin

by Acoustic Odyssey   Feb 15, 2014

Don't act like
you've never been curious
as to what sin tastes like

Dance with me...
and I promise
to guide your steps
only to the most
delicate landmines

Trust me...
and I'll whisper
the emptiest metaphor dipped
your heart could ever hold
its beat for

Let me in...
so I can ease your curiosity
while embracing those soft curves
with gentle talons

Love me...
as I slowly poke holes
in your illusions of grandeur
with doses of reality

when regret fills that empty space
made obvious by sunrise
Hate me


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  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sensuality wrapped in darkness...this poem hits nerves in a delightful! I have been reading hugely from here and I must say the darkness and sexy feel of this one is a stand-out! Added to my faves.

  • 5 years ago

    by =The-Fairy-Mary-Poppins=

    I like the format and I seem to find it romantic in a dark way. It's very demanding and yet at the same time it promises something that both seem to enjoy but it's for a momentarily pleasure, it's very well written, beautiful imagery, and the tone was stunning.

  • 5 years ago

    by GB

    Oh my Lord, I know one one great poet and a wonderful friend who can come up with such mesmerizing piece of poetry.... I can distinguish your verses no doubt.

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Dark romance at its finest in this poem!! I read it the first and second time with my mouth open!! Speechless came to mind.. It's difficult to pull off a romantic dark poem... it takes the right wording and needs an enchanting rhythm ... this poem is magical and a true delight!!

  • 6 years ago

    by I am

    The way u have written very nice.

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